But, Therefore, Meanwhile: 3 Words to Make Your Storytelling Better

 

Vox.com

Welles’s internal editing of the piece doesn’t use the thought “and then” to structure his ideas. Welles understood intuitively — and Zhou has learned from him — that “and then” is deadly to storytelling.

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